Advertisement is all around us. It is avoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our life while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is true that there is a numerous means of advertising which appears everywhere. In recent years, promotion and marketing has become a topic which has attracted much attention in society. It is argued by some people that advertising has plenty of merits in human’s life; meanwhile what others believe is that it gives us harmful impacts. Personally, I am of the opinion that there are two sides to every coin.
To begin with, it is generally accepted that there are many reasons for which promotion is an advantageous element of our lives. Firstly, the publicity plays an essential role in terms of introducing customers to variety of goods. That is to say, through promotion campaign, buyer are exposed to more options including model, function, and price of products before choosing the one goods that is to their taste. Secondly, advertising is a useful channel that helps businessmen to maintain and protect their brand name to compete with their leading competitors. The trademark of each company are distinguished by different advertisement, hence, the quality of goods from various cooperation will be compare. Accordingly, it is necessary to support the development of advertising.
Nevertheless, there are also arguments stating that the demerits of promotion are thoroughly considerable. First and foremost a well-produced advertising might not ensure a product of the same quality. It is not unusual to witness cases where people complain about the huge difference between what was advertised and what the goods is really like. Additionally, an abundant of commercials can trigger the desire to purchase new goods, regardless of their impracticability, resulting in the waste of both money and time. In brief, in some cases, the part of advertising will not be proved its use because of the above drawbacks.
To conclude the, it is a fact which cannot be disputed that there exist opposite stances on complicated issue. From my perspective, promotion is a great way to connect products with clients.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one good; a good; goods
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, in brief, in some cases, it is true, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24382716049 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06485522085 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4103147987 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180148838143 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446329820922 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643939398032 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934366097191 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726538767124 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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