In today’s modern world, along with the rapid technological progress, advertising is also growing significantly; therefore, people encounter a large number of adverts everywhere. While there are ample different views about the implications of this trend, I strongly believe that advertisements bring both advantages and disadvantages for mankind's lives and the development of current society as well.
On the one hand, advertising has several beneficial influences. Firstly, the growth of adverts plays a vital role in the revenue of the brand. To clarify this, through commercial advertisements, corporations can reach potential buyers via eye-catching ads and attract them to purchase their products so the profit of these brands will increase. Secondly, consumers can be provided a wide range of information about the stuff as well as informed newly-launched products thanks to commercials. For example, when consumers want to buy technological devices like a smartphone, and they lack information about different kinds of phones, advertisements enable people to know which one is appropriate for them.
On the other hand, the appearance of ample adverts may disturb people's online experience. Consumers may feel grumpy and perhaps overwhelmed by the large number of advertisements when they are watching videos on Youtube or even working via online networks. Furthermore, children are particularly vulnerable to advertisers’ persuasion attempts. To explain this, brands tend to aim to persuade children because young people can easily be attracted by colorful advertisements so youngsters will put pressure on parents to buy things which are advertised on television and Youtube. Consequently, advertising can pose threats negatively to the behavior of children.
In conclusion, although advertisements bring some benefits not only for marketing businesses but also for consumers, this trend also has some negative effects on customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nificantly; therefore, people encounter a large number of adverts everywhere. While there are amp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33209261797 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.69417277 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101312978576 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399319554043 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334682162188 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642468125869 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236004542511 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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