Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
Advertisements, is a common instruments for promoting one's images and offerings, are widely used by individuals and organisations nowadays. In my opinion, the utilization of the marketing tool has both negative and positive impacts which will be elaborated below.
There are many benefits associated with adverts namely provision of products information, making products popular among targeted customers and opening up many job opportunities for people. Firstly, the fundamental function of advertising is to supply the data relevant to goods towards potential buyers. This can be implemented by increasing the exposure of the customers to particular product and service or individuals through TV chanel, magazine, internet platforms and so forth. By doing so, individuals and economic organisations can raise their brand image awareness or encourage the sales of certain goods. This enables these parties to build their trust with customers or gain monetary values in later selling process. In addition, advertisement as an industry creates a wide range of jobs for people. Photographers, content creators, designers are professionals who capitalise on the sector and make their living. Thus, advertising not only benefits the economy as a whole but employs many workers.
Apart from merits, advertisements cause certain disturbance to people. The first effect is that some people are overexploiting adverts in order to encourage impulsive buying behavior. Banner, signage, and unique selling points are depoyed together to manipulate clients into buying the merchandises they do not need. The phenomenon happens regularly among the young, as they are less price sensitive and easier to be impacted than their older counterparts. Likewise, certain advertised videos or news try to give products an exaggerated account which may subsequently result in the detrimental impacts on users' health. This is especially the case for medicines and medical treatment, with which providers often depict their ability to cure patient's illnesses even for uncurable disease such as cancer. As a consequence, customers of these drugs and medical services, who are desparate of sickness, would buy them and hope to get recovered. Therefore, the overuse of advertisement could lead to dire consequences for many sick people.
In sum, advertisements have both merits and drawbacks. I believe people should stay alert and look up the relavent information before buying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
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Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, likewise, look, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65582655827 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09278807751 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3639931801 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.35 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697123369239 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022591734962 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026470625536 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484068469077 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232011175179 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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