There has been an argument about whether advertising has advantages or disadvantages in the rapid growth of technology life. Although people believe that they are able to gain benefits from watching an advertisement, the rest of them argued that it annoyed them. From my personal perspective, I believe advertising exerts a positive impact on people’s life.
On the one hand of this problem, individuals give the following reasons to support their opinion. The major factor is an advertisement which considers as the latest announcement is a distraction. When they were watching movies or television shows at attractive scenes, unless they have an emergency or important problem to tackle, almost everyone is unwilling to keep their eyes off the screen. For this reason, some people have experienced feelings of being annoyed because the publish announcements forced them to watch while they were eagerly waiting for the interesting scenes. Secondly, it is stated that buying advertisement products is not considered as a wise choice. It is an apparent fact that the companies tend to overpraise their items such as rating their brand with unreal 5 starts, posting fake images or sending a wide range of automatic supporting and compliments. Because of the information of their wanting products are being distorted so that they fail to afford it, as a result, those who bought fake items decide to ignore advertisements.
Contrarily, I would be declined to argue against the aforementioned view due to these below explanations. One of the primary reasons is, rely on advertisements, people stand a good chance to own newly launched products. In the digital age when the latest trend has gained popularity and announce rapidly to customers as long as they have smartphone access to the internet, consequently, it is highly possible for those who are genuinely passionate about fashion to afford new items of an accessory or other products. Furthermore, advertising could be an effective way to recharge ourselves. We can deny the variety of advertisement contents which include not only recreational but also educational meaning such as wearing Nike to do volunteer work, give Hura, Ensure to senior citizens, et cetera. Embarking some meaningful contents after a strenuous day will decline an increase in depression and anxiety of the hustle and bustle life.
Taking everything into consideration, both opinions have been outlined above are well-grounded, consequently, we have difficulty deciding an accurate conclusion. Nevertheless, I would argue that advertising is beneficial for our life because the advantages will justify the downsides.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...enced feelings of being annoyed because the publish announcements forced them to watch whil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40579710145 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13934216132 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1098790185 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191908459374 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622220059354 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370172882808 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120440976285 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022067093519 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...enced feelings of being annoyed because the publish announcements forced them to watch whil...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40579710145 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13934216132 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1098790185 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191908459374 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622220059354 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370172882808 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120440976285 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022067093519 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.