Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the widespread marketing campaign has expanded through an abundance of advertisements. A variety of companies have used advertisements as a well-known method. There are many individuals who believe that advertising a product on the basis that it has a positive influence on the livelihood of residents. From my perspective, the advertisement has played a crucial role in the economy by performing the advances of the product, which appears positively in the daily routine.
To begin with, the influence of advertisement on social networks is foremost, especially when it provides an abundance of options for the clients to purchase the commodity. Due to the fact that the customers can make a clear comparison of certain aspects of the product such as price and features in order to decide the most satisfying choice. For example, offline shopping can be inconvenient by the apparent distance, as the customers can consider the option of products, the establishment of promotion in order to satisfy the demand of people as well as reduce the time to find the product. Additionally, the proliferation of advertisement on the basis of the social network has influenced the life of civilians, especially when the ubiquitous way to stimulate is by apps and marketing campaigns.
However, there is no doubt that besides the benefits, the drawbacks of advertisement have also remained. As a consequence, the information delivered in advertisements is not always accurate, the scammer can take advantage of the consumer by the fake images and shoddy supply, which is not simply certain to the advertisement. Moreover, the annoying advertisements that appear on the basis such as Youtube, Spotify, and Google, can be bothered by the entertainment demand of users, and they try to eliminate the promotion in order to maximize the experience on these apps.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that advertisements sometimes can be annoying and it affects the experience of people. However, the positive influences of advertisement in the economy and in the livelihood of residents are important as it makes the supply be available for the customer to access.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e inconvenient by the apparent distance, as the customers can consider the option...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26589595376 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29547199266 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6973768822 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.153846154 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166068492409 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650422271433 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425994726494 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110619611997 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377508978399 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e inconvenient by the apparent distance, as the customers can consider the option...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26589595376 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29547199266 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6973768822 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.153846154 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166068492409 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650422271433 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425994726494 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110619611997 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377508978399 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.