Advertising.
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Could you please correct grammar ?
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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertising.
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Could you please correct grammar ?
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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The fact of matter is that ,the advertisements have become an argument issue .We are surrounded by lots of ads .It is become an unavoidable part of everyone life. In my country, over the last decade, there was a considerable debate about this issue .People have different views about the advertisements effects on our life. In my opinion ,there are both positive and negative impacts of the advertisements.
Some people claim that advertisements have a great benefits in our life. For example, we can fast find out the new products and the last prices by some advertising .Also, advertisements can enable us to make a good plans to shopping weekly. The third advantage is that, by online marketing we can easily purchase some stuffs such as ; books , cars and flowers. The specific studies have shown that people prefer shopping by internet rather than going to markets.
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| 2018-10-19 | alsdwimohed | 39 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: .
...rtisements have become an argument issue .We are surrounded by lots of ads .It is ...
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Suggestion: We
...isements have become an argument issue .We are surrounded by lots of ads .It is be...
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Suggestion: .
... issue .We are surrounded by lots of ads .It is become an unavoidable part of ever...
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Suggestion: It
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...s a considerable debate about this issue .People have different views about the ad...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: ,
...ments effects on our life. In my opinion ,there are both positive and negative imp...
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Suggestion: .
... and the last prices by some advertising .Also, advertisements can enable us to ma...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...nd the last prices by some advertising .Also, advertisements can enable us to make a...
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Line 13, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ily purchase some stuffs such as ; books , cars and flowers. The specific studies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3612565445 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46127388596 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65445026178 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4764113872 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0909090909 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511125258143 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188468428564 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187735875787 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236605664925 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.265629996902 0.056905535591 467% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.