The advertising industry has a huge influence on society. Do you think the positives of advertising
outweigh the negatives?
Thanks to scientists' innovation, which made the vitality of the populace great access to the word. Due to the incremental production of automation, tremendous figures of industrialization favor supplanting their amenities through advertisement. This essay shall delve into both the optimistic and pessimistic sides of advertising.
To commence with, it is readily axiomatic that, in this cutting-edge epoch, communication technology has a great influence in shaping the individual's ideology. Looking at the current scenario, most of the management remunerates a tremendous amount of wealth to the celebrities to show off their aggregate of products, this is done to sway the communal public because if they see their favorite actress in their channel holding a product like Pepsi, they will consider in buying Pepsi, rather than any other soda beverages. Secondly, it makes consumers buy any kind of product indubitably, otherwise, it makes the customer strenuous to purchase a particular product. Furthermore, advertising is the most convenient and reliable arena, where the masses can see, the latest trend of technologies. which is easily accessible to various necessities through their casting eye over the social outlets.
Looking at the flip side, the media display unwanted criteria to the public such as a smoking inhaler, alcohol drinks along junk foods. These can brainstorm the globe, particularly, the young adolescents, the reason behind it, the way a commercial is displayed on a screen. However, fewer commercial is infused with factual description and they deter to hide the veracity to the folks because it can lead to a business crisis and enormous financial debt. Employers are less concerned about the future of individuals. For instance, recently an adult purchase chips from the market, after consuming them, immediately he was admitted to the emergency ward because the fries contain a large number of chemicals.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned, commercial can make the life of the population easier but it can affect humans dramatically, this trend can be reversed, when the government enacts a stringent action related to this. So in, my standpoint I consider media has myriad benefits than drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53197674419 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13729328891 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65988372093 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4652984944 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.866666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0306092968951 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.010433085922 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022985266508 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157349354027 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165620143486 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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