It is a curious fact that, changing nature of the world affects the daily life of the people. People are not happy with their existing daily life at present compared to older days due to remarkable changes in the world. In my opinion, I strongly agree that, the people are not satisfactory at present.
Admittedly, technological developments and work loads are the typical issues create mental tension in the people. Which can lead to dissatisfaction in the life. To substantiate it, an increasing number of people are suffering from anxiety and tension disorders. For example, around 12 percentage of the world populations are suffering from mental disturbances.
On the other hand, good provisions and availability of resources made the life easy in current era. In pilloried times, people have been suffering from lack of things. But developments and new inventions lead to changes in progress attribute to present situation.
Moreover, distance in the relationship increses more. Nowadays, people are not getting enough time to communicate with each other. So there is a gap forming within the relations. Final effect is on mind and they become unhappy.
To sum up, spending time with others and listening attitudes make the people more happy. It can bring satisfactory life in the people. We have to take effort to bring happyness in the people.
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Essay evaluation report
technological developments and work loads are the typical issues create mental tension in the people
technological developments and work loads are the typical issues which create mental tensions among people
Sentence: Moreover, distance in the relationship increses more.
Error: increses Suggestion: increases
Sentence: We have to take effort to bring happyness in the people.
Error: happyness Suggestion: happiness
flaws:
No. of Words: 220 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 220 350
No. of Characters: 1099 1500
No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.995 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.941 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.977 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es create mental tension in the people. Which can lead to dissatisfaction in the life...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270161290323 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.149193548387 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100806451613 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0322580645161 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0443548387097 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90586113323 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403225806452 0.0326793684256 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00403225806452 0.00163938923432 246% => OK
Determiners: 0.0806451612903 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00806451612903 0.021408717616 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00403225806452 0.011925033212 34% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1359.0 1933.35771543 70% => OK
No of words: 220.0 316.048096192 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17727272727 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20517956788 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386363636364 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281818181818 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145454545455 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90586113323 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 60.4601507326 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.9411764706 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9576804441 49.517814964 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9411764706 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 41.1229946524 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.07547169811 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31077366879 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094117904156 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0819949422766 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533500209591 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10508579287 0.148594505496 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125257347113 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619038506925 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282724901922 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0725920783831 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203571066354 0.228012699653 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643697164886 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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