Air traffic is lwading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth of low- cost passenger flights, others to low cost holiday destinations. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by ta

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Air traffic is lwading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth of low- cost passenger flights, others to low cost holiday destinations. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily.

Do you agree or disagree?

The emergence of cost-effective plane tickets and vacation packages had promted a sognificant rise on the air transport industry. Consequentle, additional airport facilities were built which resulted to further noise, pollution and air traffic. These drawbacks have encouraged to push for additional tax to the industry, which I am strongly opposed to.

In the first place, flight taxes are already very expensive. I do not think airports will be amenable to increase it more because of the fear of losing revenues. If this proposition will be implemented, people will surely search for other means of transport that better suit their budget. I, for one have purchased discounted plane tickets but the astronomical tax more than made up for the lessened price.

Furthermore, if commuters turn to different modes of travelling like trains and cars, pollution, noise and traffic will still remain as issues, only this timr if would be on land rather than on air. The frequency of flights may lessen but as a result, the number of land and sea vehicles will also increase eventually reaching the same amount of pollution caused by aviation.

Therefore, it is impractical to increase the burden among passengers by adding to the already heavy taxes. This is not only because it poses a risk for decline in profitd but it also offers a little solution to pollution and it even compromises the safety and convenience of travellers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, as a result, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13247863248 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86106882257 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6811505123 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191955758609 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642089048507 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490687374851 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102159656483 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376905293579 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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