All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?
It is argued that government should provide free education and medicine to its population. This essay disagrees this opinion. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that not everyone benefits from access to unpaid healthcare and education and, secondly, discuss that these services will fall in value, if all people are not forced to pay for it.
To begin with, there appears to be some evidence that there will be some people, who will suffer from free schooling and medicine, when it is funded by government, because it takes money from taxes. That is why residents must pay higher taxes for services, in which they are not needed, if they have excellent health and the job that does not require any education. It seems to be unfair because it reduces their disposal personal income.
Another reason why not all schooling and medicine should be free for everyone is that people value less things that they received without payment in return. Even more, there some consequences for national economy. Let us start with the first sphere – healthcare. Free medical service makes some people irresponsible for their health condition because they think that they can come to the hospital and solve the problem. Another sphere – free education – face risks that all people will choose highly paying profession what can lead to a deficit of work force in other sectors.
To sum it up, not all education and medicine should be free for everybody because it leads to raising taxes. In addition, people will value less their health and graduation certificates and there will be labor shortage in some spheres of the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun things is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... free for everyone is that people value less things that they received without payme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0293040293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38820535181 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542124542125 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3734779871 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25325121172 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920292070623 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788940115728 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160137866769 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328330733464 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.