All education and healthcare should be funded by the government for free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In XXI century, our perception nearly about everything has changed remarkably. We could see this cahnge by noticing the increasing number of private sectors, rather than public, both in educatiion and healthcare units. Basically, public institutions and hospitals are funded by the government to the public for free. However, I wish the government would encourage the private sections to offer free healthcare services and education for everyone.
I am going to start with why I thik that, the government should establish more schools with no tuition fees. Firstly, if the education was free the so-called rate of literacy would not exist. Even though the number of illeterate people is falling, there are stil thousands of them. Offering everyone fully funded education is an optimal way of developing a country both economically and globally. For example, Germany has one of the most stable economy in the world. I think the driven force behind this prosperity is the government making higher and secondry education free for everybody.
The most importan thing in a person's life must be his or her welness. Because, as a human we tend to expose some illnesses at some stage of our life. These times might not be difficult for well-off people to deal with. In cotrast, for underpreviliged people paying lots of money for doctors and buying expensive, but necessary, medicines is a huge issue. I think making the nation healthy and care about the citizens should be a responsibility of the government. Logically, everyone living in a country pays the certain amount of taxes to the government, which I do believe some should be returned to the public. The crime rate also would decline if getting healthcare was free. Because I have seen some people steling other's valuable possessions as they were pressed for money when they had to pay the healthcare bills for their loved one's. I did not mean they were committing crime intentionally, but because they did not simply have any other options left.
To sum up, making education and healthcare free for everyone could develop not only a one country, but also the whole world. At the end, I believe educational and healthcare related services should be funded by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05962059621 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76237251103 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566395663957 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0832096931 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9047619048 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374733348299 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100624900189 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703092754051 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23716061756 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321322978116 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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