All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?
Obesity continues to swell exponentially world over, and this is causing serious financial and health problems. These consequences and major triggers such as eating habits and sedentary lifestyles will be examined in this essay.
Leading dietitians, unanimously, believe that what people have been recently eating is a precursor to obesity. For example, pizza and pasta products have experienced a rapid increase in sales within the last few decades. Ingesting these starchy food products causes surges in levels of insulin, a hormone which enables the body to store more calories. Needless to say, if the origins of obesity are more deeply rooted, lack of physical activity plays another significant role. That is to say, worldwide, there has been a large shift towards less physically demanding work, leading to more accumulation of fat in humans’ bodies. For example, those who have an undemanding desk job or children who watch TV on end are more prone to add weight, according to cited statistics. Thus, less active recreational pursuits or effortless jobs compound with unhealthy food consumption makes a perfect recipe to gain weight.
Although there are numerous negative ramifications of obesity, I feel they can be viewed through two vantage points. The first tangible result of obesity is the multifarious life-threatening health issues witnessed among corpulent people since a wide range of cardiovascular to cancers are linked with corpulence. The negative sides are not limited to an individual’s life, but it, too, affects the economy. This is evidenced by the necessary annual medical costs attributed to obesity-related diseases and overweight prevention programs. In Iran, for instance, obese and overweight people receive billions of dollars in government subsidies on a yearly basis, which outweighs the amount allocated to prevent HIV. These negatives are felt by all levels of society from individuals, to corporations, to governments.
In summary, obesity is the precursor to health and economic problems, and it stems from improper eating habits and a sedentary lifestyle. In my opinion, were healthier diets and sufficient physical activities promoted by the media and educational systems, the issue could be encountered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54335260116 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07533464578 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5383557117 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.823529412 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116886215294 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331949264615 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444705911768 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064533748709 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479969469209 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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