Although more and more people read news on the Internet newspapers will still remain the most important source of news To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will still remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although the number of people reading news via electrical gadgets witnesses an upward trend, traditional presses will still play a vital role in the source of news. Personally, I partly agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, it is readily apparent that people opt for online news due to a number of reasons. The primary reason is that as a consequence of industrialization and modernization, the number of individuals now utilizing electric technology is increasing. Along with that, the quality of those gadgets is innovated, that we could update all the breaking information around the world solely in the blink of an eye as long as our appliances are connected to the internet and therefore adapt to the urgent circumstances instantaneously. The second reason is that the community could state their point of view and debate the news. For instance, feeling symbols, making comments, and so on.
On the other hand, newspapers will still remain an important source of news for some reasons. Firstly, traditional presses are incompatible with digital presses in which everyone could upload everything including fake news on the internet, newspapers usually have a double-checked step before being delivered to readers. As a consequence, the information is accurate and the comprehension is ensured. Secondly, newspapers are reasonably-priced which everyone could afford and approach the news easier. For example, the cost of newspapers per month is $10, in contrast with the cost of the digital presses which we have to pay for gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops, internet bills, electricity bills, and so on.
In conclusion, despite the growth of people reading online news, newspapers will still be an important source of information.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 667, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...r gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops,.. , the internet bills, electricity bill...
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Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops,.. , the internet bills, electricity bills...
^^
Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dgets such as mobile phones, laptops,.. , the internet bills, electricity bills a...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28825622776 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11573610537 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0136563362 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298903471902 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100630495032 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10818875153 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211297929848 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787292186304 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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