Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.
It is generally viewpoint that newspaper is still maintained the most significant position regardless of the upward trend in reading online sources. In my opinion, this idea is completely flawed owing to the benefits in terms of saving costs and convenience accessibility that the internet offers.
Firstly, there is usually free of charge for those who read online due to websites are frequently paid for advertising business. Moreover, majority of reputation global magazines have built websites on their own and updated constantly news like BBC, VOAs, TImes,...Moreover, reading online is a efficient way for you to look up whatever you want. It’s clearly that you will be provided fully look at different aspects of the problem. So in the other words, you are able to get a plenty of informations with just a little free.
Secondly, the enormous knowledges is willing for you to explore everytime at everywhere you are with internet accessibility. You may read the news without light before going to bed or even read the lastest news when traveling. You really just need a smart phone with internet access and every informations are in your hand right now.
In conclusion, as the two analyzed reason above, I totally disagree with the idea that newspaper is the most popular way for getting news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ed constantly news like BBC, VOAs, TImes,...Moreover, reading online is a efficien...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...onstantly news like BBC, VOAs, TImes,...Moreover, reading online is a efficient way for ...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onstantly news like BBC, VOAs, TImes,...Moreover, reading online is a efficient way for ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, TImes,...Moreover, reading online is a efficient way for you to look up whatev...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10697674419 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8871922093 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6343934984 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216811164986 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816927675611 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565369123528 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132136432133 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031105017096 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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