Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain
the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
In the global era, moderately most of people in the world are begin to interest to read news on the internet. The positive aspect of reading news in the internet are more visible, readability, as well as efficient than newspapers. However, I would like to agree that newspapers are most important source of news than internet. I hold this view for several reasons are set out below.
First, I would like to argue that newspaper is more credible, comprehensive, as well as skeptic than internet. Referring to Research Centre for communication Studies the University of Birmingham stated that even though the internet are more productive and faster to publish news, albeit most of the news in the internet tend to less credible and under standard to protect hoax information.
On the other hand, for strengthening the argumentation, the International Journalist Association (IJA) stated that the newspapers have been becoming the 1st most important source of news due to it have editorial assessor who took a role for checking and recheck the credibility of the data, while most of news website company do not have it. due to these conditions, anonymous are easily to involve, engage, and write fake news on the internet than on the newspapers.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe that even though some scholars believed that the internet era should extinguish the number of conventional literacy companies such as newspapers and scientific books, albeit there is little evidence to support this view. Furthermore, the statistic from Digital communication Forum (DCF) showed that most of publisher companies have successful to utilize the internet for innovating their market products which it implicated towards the improvement their profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
In the global era, moderately most of people in the world are begin to interest to r...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...erately most of people in the world are begin to interest to read news on the interne...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as efficient 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ible, readability, as well as efficient than newspapers. However, I would like to ag...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as skeptic 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ible, comprehensive, as well as skeptic than internet. Referring to Research Centre ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3273381295 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9810856743 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2020064858 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.1 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367387431697 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154792946024 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105456983721 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228417753777 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122357961529 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.