Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers are still the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is common at the present time to see that people use the internet to check news rather than a traditional method of reading a newspaper. I would argue that electronic devices are more comfortable to use than newspapers.
Newspapers remain an important source of reading. In addition, the older generation still prefers oldest method to read their news, which is because they have traditionally method and they prefer it more for many years, or simply do not know how to open the link. Also, the newspaper comes with sources of entertainment like a crossword. This makes it more attractive for them than online sources.
However, the newspaper does not disappear completely, the internet is likely to become the more dominant sources over time. This is primarily because younger people tend to read the news online and prefer not to pay for it, so those reading newspapers, the older generation is gradually declining. This links in with a second reason, which is that media companies start to see a drop income from newspapers, printing them will be unprofitable, and they will be forced to find how to make money from news online.
To sum up, although newspapers remain popular today, they will gradually be replaced by the desire to read the newspapers by electronic versions. This may be a sad loss due to their history, it is unfortunately that online sources will be replaced them necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: prefers the oldest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, second, so, still, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95762711864 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75363422342 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8658770349 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.363636364 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276103260348 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106615847605 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047086060406 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166155633979 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622678744086 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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