Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In this day and age, technology has been playing an integral part in facilitating many activities in most parts of the world, a tremendous number of people start working and studying from home. From my perspective, I believe that this trend undoubtedly brings about an array of benefits.
Due to its accessibility, technology entitles human beings to connect globally. In fact, citizens can utilize various social media website in order to connect with people living in many countries in the world regardless of geological distance. A prime example is Facebook, which is considered one of the most worldwide commonly-used online platform. Users just need to create a Facebook account and then have the ability to either send messages or make phone calls to people in most countries while staying at home. Many organizations can make use of this platform to keep in touch with their potential customers or partners without traveling among countries. Therefore, the emergence of technology may facilitate the globalization process and help humankind stay closer than ever.
Internet is also a great source of precious knowledge for every single person. Since technology tends to become cheaper, people can gain access to a wide range of readily available information. By a click of a mouse, people, such as students or scientists, may easily find numerous articles in many domains written by researcher from all nations on the globe. Moreover, adulds who find it difficult to learn a new skill due to their schedule may register vocational courses in the Internet and study from home. In addition, many reliable newspapers aggregate news happening every single minute, resulting in citizens keeping well-informed and well-prepared if the similar events occur in the local area.
In conclusion, technological breakthroughs have rendered the life more convenient than ever. I am of the opinion that the fast development of the technology brings a whole host of merits to human beings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29746835443 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95146472915 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648734177215 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7621797864 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213801250646 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590251685622 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473178256522 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122576681856 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490068303439 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.