Around the world, many animal species become extinct. Sme people believe that countries and individuals must try to solve this problem. Others believe that concentrating on problems of human beings is more important than those concerning species. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The mass extinction of the animal has became a pervasive issue that some people are believed the government should resolve it, whereas others acclaim that people need to concentrate on the challenging question of humans being. I am on the opinion that we should put more efforts on preserving animal species.
On one side of the argument, we must combat the situation of the human race. It is undeniable that the low experience standards of living could strength the issue about the essential needs of people. While industrialised countries have fully built their economies, developing and under-developed countries have not. This can lead to the lack of resources in these countries so the government should give efforts to this seriously situation in order to improve citizens' lives. Moreover, the social stability should be ensured by the authority. Therefore, natural disasters, political events and the horrors of war are still a part of lofe so these need to be taken into consideration.
However, we must tackle the problem of the increased in animal extinction. In fact, food security is a major issue. Animals are an important part of the food chain so the extinction can disrupt the balance of the ecosystem. As the result, the common demands of human do not satisfy the worldwide population. Futhermore, humans have the responsibilities to prevent extinctions. Humans activities cause environmental pollution, which lead to the disappearance of many animal species. The responsibilities of protecting the environment and animals rests with animals.
In conclusion, people must solve both problems in order to protect the animals and the essential demands of humans also
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices 78
- Around the world many animal species become extinct Sme people believe that countries and individuals must try to solve this problem Others believe that concentrating on problems of human beings is more important than those concerning species Discuss both 73
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 78
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
The mass extinction of the animal has became a pervasive issue that some people are ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32958801498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08576958587 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1984881101 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245014681233 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671845268553 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620734585322 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158031441645 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544443422037 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.