Art is considered an important part off society as well as an expression office culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
Is commonly believed that art is playing dynamic role in highlighting society oldest norms and values but with the technological advancement more focus is delivered on machines and science. I believe children should be taught art at school and also encourage them to learn it. Firstly, art is a symbol of history it highlights many historical symbols however globalisation has compelled emission to move focus on development and history for which this sector is neglected. Europe which is considered as a nation of art very smoothly preserved their art and culture even after the deadly World War One and World War Two.
Secondly, learning art is essential for children so throw it student realises there is free and the importance of art no doubt other subjects are also quite important which should not be in ignored.
Certainly some parents think that learning are won’t help their children in future because they are not jobs related to art in our society never place there are many jobs regarding to art and one could get any decent job. Finally with art we could highlight our history and attract many foreigners in our land, and this can really boost our tourism sector.
To conclude, this every institute should encourage and teach art to their students along with other subjects.
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| 2021-05-29 | Faisal Gaffar | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'society the oldest'.
Suggestion: society the oldest
...is playing dynamic role in highlighting society oldest norms and values but with the technolog...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...o art and one could get any decent job. Finally with art we could highlight our history...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00925925926 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56553339312 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3155602415 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320993071292 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142868911107 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830482259039 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19753732539 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076686239515 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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