The well-being of individuals is likely to deteriorate in the future compared to the last few decades. In my opinion, although the number of health cases is rising, it is likely there will an improvement in the general health of a person over the course of time.
There are a number of people that are diagnosed with serious health issues, such as diabetes, cancer and heart ailments. This is primarily due to the increase in the stressful environment at work or at school as well as poor dietary choices. Individuals may find it difficult to manage and juggle the increased competition in the outside world and succumb to overindulgence in food. However, these individuals are becoming aware and educating themselves on the long term adverse impact of poor health choices, indicating, people are more willing to diagnose themselves with a doctor, to understand how to improve their health, allowing them to take measures to prevent any long term illnesses that may arise.
Further, there is an increase in the demand for dieticians as people look to healthier eating alternatives and a proper meal plan for the intake of appropriate nutrition. There is guidance and constant monitoring of patients by the doctors, to ensure a healthier future. Additionally, celebrities have an increasing influence on the youth and adults today as they look to remain fit through exercise. Hence, there is a surge in the number of people globally, looking to go to the gym or hire a personal trainer to remain fit. Furthermore, many schools have taken the initiative to include physical education as part of their curriculum to encourage students to take part in various sports and increase their interest in athletics.
In conclusion, I believe that as people are starting to understand the implications of poor health choices, they are striving towards its betterment in the future through nutrient-rich foods and athletic activities.
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where r 67
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13057324841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94487502904 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3833016563 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117795868356 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406023466099 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319602777701 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717863325003 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226426710563 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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