The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999).
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information show below
The diagram depicts how many people from European Union countries worked in the United States in 1999.
As an overall trend, French demonstrated the lowest point, about 5000 people have worked from this country, while employees from British show the peak rate in which was roughly 5 times more than French ones. Meanwhile, the second rate was occupied by German workers which approximately 20000 people have worked in US. Employees who come from Italy delineated penultimate rate which second less workers who worked more than 5000 people in US in 1999. Nevertheless, overall 20000 people from other European Union countries were engaged in US in 1999
To sum up, people who was immigrated t US to work purpose show a peak rate, therefore last rate was occupied by French employees.
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun workers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, second, therefore, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 130.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05384615385 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46980582808 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2126421473 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144374827334 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095643027968 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660255947619 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120967710315 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065394040013 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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