The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given bar-chart classifies the ten highest countries in term of using and generating electricity in 2014. the vertical axis represents the rank (1 to 10) for each country, and the horizontal axis refers to the electricity production/consumption in billion kWh.
Overall, for all countries, the production rates were more than the consumption rates except for Germany. Also, the amount of generated and utilized electricity in both China and US equaled the total amount of electricity in the remainder eight countries.
In details, the generation and production rates could be categorized within different ranges. The maximum value was assigned to China with approximately similar production/consumption rate(5,300 billion kWh). This figure was descending in the second country (USA) , which was 4,099 in production and significantly less in consumption ( 3,866). Russia, Japan and India had almost similar production/consumption rate and they ranges between 1000 and 700 billion kWh. another groups were Canada, France, Brazil and Germany which produced/consumed electricity with in the range of (600 to 500) billion kWh.
the minimum tenth value was for Korea republic which was 4850 billion kWh in production and slightly similar in consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, as for, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66844919786 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58605328741 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.151152023 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.666666667 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170099991534 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948449386209 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598730167824 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11248381997 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592226551382 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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