Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.
Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
It is true that nowadays, children prefer staying at home watching television and playing video games instead of spending their time exploring and discovering the outside world. Many believe that this trend can have some detrimental effects on a child’s growth and development, some of which will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, most of the knowledge kids gain on nature are usually based on what they see and hear on multimedia platforms. Thus, they are not able to experience firsthand the wonders nature has to offer. This can dampen their interest towards nature and can lead to a non-caring attitude. In a time where climate change is at hand, the younger generation needs to be more involved in order to ensure that succeeding generations will continue to enjoy the world the same way we did.
Secondly, being indoors lead to a sedentary lifestyle which can negatively impact their health and make them at risk to certain medical conditions like juvenile diabetes and childhood obesity. In contrast, engaging nature is a good form of exercise which not only strengthens their muscles and bones but also enhances their immune system, hence, making them more equipped to battle infections and certain illnesses.
Lastly, kids who play outdoors are able to interact with other children and develop their communication and social skills. In this way, they learn are more capable of interacting and expressing themselves to other people.
In conclusion, lack of exposure to the natural environment can have a negative impact on a child’s mental, physical, emotional and social growth. Parents, therefore, should encourage their children to play more outdoor activities and limit their use of devices to assure a balance overall growth and development.
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Suggestion: wonders'; wonder's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3074204947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74803997558 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.987608735 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276810459813 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929694083095 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414861503873 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13691588102 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463050046507 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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