Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree?
These days, living without doing lots of activities has dangerous effects on people, especially their health. Some people think that the best way to avoid this problem is that school should force students to do sports or do various exercises at least 3 times in a week; in my opinion, I totally agree with them.
Not having a dynamic lifestyle makes teenagers have obesity. With the advancement of technology and not being controlled by parents, children around the world can easily play video games for a long time or glued on computer screens all day which make them put on weight. For example, a recent study from BBC News said that a child who is only 4 years old can influence using his family smart television to watch his favorite cartoon videos without help from adults. This will lead to the fact that any younger generation, from infants to teenagers, could gain weight if they do not have regular exercises. Besides, school regulations should force students to participate in a variety of sports such as swimming, running or baseball or create more sporty exercises during school time.
Furthermore, children doing less sporty activities can suffer isolation and seriously have autism. Nowadays, a major number of young adults prefer making friends online instead of going out to have face-to-face meetings, a journalist in CNN news analyzed. This makes children have a lack of interaction between people with others and sometimes makes them feel alone or even faced with dangerous autism. Due to that impact, students should join sport clubs or projects, which have been taken up by people who have the same interest such as playing football or climbing, to communicate with pioneers or make new relationships.
However, many parents argue that doing exercises or participating in a sport is unnecessary because their children should spend more time on their studying than waste time on playing any sporty activities. Personally, I think that it is a worse awareness as it leads to a slow and inactive generation.
Indeed, I strongly agree with the regulation to have more activities in sport more than three times per week in both university students and school children because it would help youngsters avoid the negative impacts on mental health problems such as lack of interactions, autism and even obesity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, at least, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0703125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66255252092 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3823277972 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.071428571 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333602143033 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104771639606 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956992187768 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200222456669 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100767152111 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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