Since the beginning of 21st century, there have been modifications in teaching system because of innovation in technology. Therefore some people opine that students acquiring knowledge with traditional way which is on-campus is more productive,whereas others believe that modern technique of studying online is more fruitful.
I agree with both given notions and explanation for that is given in subsequent paragraph.
To commence with, let us unfold some reasons to justify why old method of teaching on-campus is more effective. Firstly, this type of teaching has been used from very earlier times till now,which is beneficial due to various reasons, one of which is inter-personal relation between teacher and student or one student with others, which means when one is finding problems while studying can immediately went to teacher for asking assistance in solving the problem, or when an individual is acquiring knowledge on-campus he can discuss his topics with other students there. To examplify, various companies hiring MBA students mostly allows students who had done their study on-campus because they require high ability in group discussions, critical analysis and communication skills and these skills are developed through discussions held in classrooms. Moreover students also build high level of confidence owing to extra curriculum activities helding on-campus such as debates, discussions etc.
On contrary, modern way of online study has its own advantages. Such as, online education is cheapest way of study as well as it is time saving . Furthermore it allows access to globally recognised teachers, which is beneficial to students of backward areas where the local teachers do not have adequate knowledge about advanced subjects. For instance, student from Bihar can have online classes regarding various subjects from recognized lecturers of MIT and Harvard University via youtube or other educational apps, as native teachers of Bihar do not have adequate knowledge about subjects like financing, marketing etc.
To conclude, On-campus education provide easy access to teachers and various discussions, whereas online study is proven to be most convenient and time saving. As far as I'm concerned I believe that there must be present mixture of both online and on-campus study to provide appropriate knowledge to students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49494949495 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81063056273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.25828888 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.2 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216659381186 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786117119663 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042782942786 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131601068559 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539458065741 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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