The best time for children to learn a second language in primary school than secondary school that what some scientists pinpoint about?. In this essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages for learn foreign language in primary school.
The most important advantages that Children don’t need motivation to learn a second language if they experience the entertainment of learning. Kids have a ability to explore different things. For example, when any child play with a new toy
He/she would like to understand how this toy is working so kid starts to open it and breakdown parts of the toy whole that child know something and other times not but in both cases adults know why children act in this way. Some scientists said that Children memories better than the adults. They can practice the language for enough time. Some studies said “ Learn a foreign language increase the social intelligence skills for the kids”.
On the other side, some experts see that child should playing more than studying in the first ten years. Because kids must joy their lives. For instance, in Finland the children don’t take home works or assignment after the school time. When teachers teach a new language they need to repeat the information for kids more than once to be sure that children will remember.
Some parents and teachers notes that the children who learned a second language they are weak in their first one .
To sum up, it is better for kids to learn a second language in primary school than any other time . Many good benefits children have when they know more than one language.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01716738197 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41619704256 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.8294093824 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9230769231 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358399604377 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13183669549 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104674419052 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211249872364 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607397813529 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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