The best way for government to solve problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
With an overload on the street, some people say that government should serve their citizen with free public transport, which is provided all day and all week. While I agree with the idea that people should more travel by bus on train, I do believe that providing them round the clock is impossible. there are several reasons why authority should encourage people use public vehicles. Firstly, travelling by bus or train decrease the amount of vehicles on the roads, which helps cutting down the number of accidents. secondly, the fewer transport moves on street, the more safely environment protected. if there is too much vehicle used, the large amount of carbon dioxide emits in the atmosphere, which affects our health. At the same time, cutting down the number of vehicles is saving natural resources which is non-renewable energy such as coal and gas. finally, it is good for commuters to save their money if they use free service because it is not necessary for them to pay fee for parking, oil or gas. Contrary to many advantages, there are three disadvantages if governments allow commuters to travel all day and all week. Firstly, drivers need to relax after hard day, and so everyone should use their own vehicles during off-peak hours because there is few transport on the road at that time. secondly, developing countries can not afford to pay fee to buy transport, energy, and this leads to a poor quality service provided. finally, people face to risk danger consists of passengers and drivers. drivers will be pain even die if they meet robbers on their bus. passengers also have danger if they wait for a long time to catch their train or their bus. In conclusion, my view is that government should encourage their citizen travel by public transport by providing free service, and it is wrong to use them round the clock.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t of vehicles on the roads, which helps cutting down the number of accidents. secondly,...
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... the more safely environment protected. if there is too much vehicle used, the lar...
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...-renewable energy such as coal and gas. finally, it is good for commuters to save their...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...few transport on the road at that time. secondly, developing countries can not afford to...
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... die if they meet robbers on their bus. passengers also have danger if they wait for a lon...
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...t is wrong to use them round the clock.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84126984127 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50802893139 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9526467631 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166532943534 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522037614644 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544443635762 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166532943534 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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