The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a
test each year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a lot of solutions that have been given to prevent accidents. Some
people think that requiring drivers to take a test annually is the best way to make
transport systems safer. In my opinion, an annual driving test is not the ultimate
way because major cases of accidents are caused by speeding and drinking, so I
will not agree with this solution.
Obviously, the more time that people have been driving, the quicker their
ability to solve complicated situations when they join traffic. Thus, a driving test
organized annually is not necessary. People need to focus on fundamental causes
leading to accidents, which are speeding and drinking. Car and motor accidents
happen because of people’s recklessness. For example, communication is so
important to promote people’s positions, so they tend to invite their counterparts
to parties and banquets. Using drinks including alcohol is inevitable. Because they
drank too much beer and wine, they who insist on driving back to their homes by
themselves, can not control their mental systems. Moreover, alcohol will push
people’s nerves to do dangerous actions such as passing the limit of speeding. As
a result, undesirable consequences occur.
To prevent this problem. Better solutions should be found. Governments
should restrict the age that people are allowed to drink and drive. Furthermore,
heavy penalties for individuals who do not follow traffic rules. For instance, in my
country, heavy fines are imposed when people are speeding. Fortunately, it is
efficient because the number of car and motor accidents has decreased
significantly.
In conclusion. Asking drivers to take an annual driving test is not sufficient
to make transport safer. Instead, people should raise their awareness then they
join traffic besides, governments should give better solutions such as new legislation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52920962199 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86427714453 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4055912467 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.45 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134158035296 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409660835826 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956485283926 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382277875408 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703915934979 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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