Making young motorists take a defensive driving course before being authorized for driving is the best method to reduce crashes on the roads. This essay agrees that were young people to follow such a course, a huge number of road traffic accidents can be prevented because they learn how to stay focused and how to be alert while they are driving.
Staying focused is vital when someone is behind the wheel as they have to check on a lot of things, such as observing traffic rules and checking mirrors, signs, signals, and road markings. In other words, drivers cannot do anything else while they are driving other than focusing on driving. In defensive driving programs, novel people are taught how to drive without getting distracted as most of the young drivers become inattentive due to talking on the phone, texting or checking messages, eating, or even watching movies while driving. Therefore, these courses equip young minds not to do such things while on the road before issuing a drivers’ license, thereby helps reducing accidents. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claimed that the number of accidents caused by defensive drivers is 95% less than non-defensive drivers.
In addition, alertness is crucial to prevent motor crashes. Drunk driving and driving under the influence of drugs result in increased morbidity and mortality rates by traffic accidents. Young adults are the most vulnerable group for alcohol and narcotic drugs; therefore, instructing them not to consume anything that makes them drowsy before getting behind the wheel is the best way to reduce crashes on the road. According to the annual newsletter of the national motor traffic department, graduates of safe driving courses are 99% less likely to drive their car under the influence of alcohol or drugs than those who have not taken the course.
In conclusion, the best way to bring traffic accidents down is making youth take a defensive driving course before giving them a drivers’ license. This essay agrees with this viewpoint as it can increase beginners’ attention and alertness while driving, thereby dropping the number of accidents on the roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15363128492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53237980436 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2120165724 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.923076923 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398752011991 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143150539063 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109010495899 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265302477296 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490018843923 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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