The best way to solve world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my own opinion, increasing the price for fuels of cars and other vehicles not using clean sources of energy is one of the best ways to solve the world's environmental problem. So that I completely agree with this idea.
The first reason that I am in favour of supporting this idea is that growing the cost of using nonrenewable energy and taxing the private car owner more in order to make them less willing to use their car and decreases the likelihood of a person buying their own car. By this way, it somehow creates a trend of using community transportation instead. Take a developed country for example, Singapore. This country has equipped this into the society for decades, and the result of this is the awareness of protecting the environment in most of their people's minds.
Additionally, I also believe that this way could bring the government more income, take part in developing their country, and also be able to take part in investing in more environmental non-profit organizations, or supporting private environmentally-friendly projects. In these ways,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...solve the worlds environmental problem. So that I completely agree with this idea. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntally-friendly projects. In these ways,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02793296089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18416151509 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.5356248988 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223851970845 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917729096925 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130669550334 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18389607685 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159641611207 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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