team sports have a vital role in children to development of cooperation among them. I agree with the statement because such sports have an intrinsic feature to influence children during their physical exercise.
Some group plays often enhance pupils' way of sharing, team works and exchanging ideas. such activities help them to cooperate with each other in every stage of development. students could be able to exchange ideas to succeed and find the reason for failure, and thereby it is crucial to have team sports in school. children could get a chance to seek support from others and provide their maximum to win as a team. for instance, athletic relay insists all the four players do their all ability to succeed in a competition, so they will plan and distribute players in a cooperative manner. likewise, team sports would help children to help each other with innovative idea exchange and which would help them to learn the fruitfulness of sharing and minimize the failures.
There are other ways to improve the students' cooperation in the school itself. Group activities like cleaning, fundraising, social work, and so on. However, compared to team sports such activities would be a lower chance to develop cooperation. For example, social activities help the students to enrich their attitude, behavior, and self-esteem to the core. similarly, individual sports items might lead to selfishness, and competitive nature too.
To sum up, it is true that team sports often make children be more cooperative. there are other methods though, cooperative nature is often produced by team sports than other activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, likewise, similarly, so, as to, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21755725191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74019486712 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0599455535 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227668354675 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083286424406 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525536453819 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151793728039 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285168894152 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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