It is often argues that the good path to acknowledge about other nations customs is to work for a multinationals companies. I firmly accord with this said notion due to friendship with their colleagues and also effect from their languages.
To commence with, it is best way to friendship another workers to know about their traditions. To explain it, when many workers work in the multinational organization then they become good friends and they go to their different occasions. with this all occasions they are know about of customs, living style, and their etiquette. To epitome, a survey was conducted by the Canadian firms found in 2016 that in their companies workers are celebrated the traditions in each year because they are know about all culture from their friends. Hence, with this all workers happily work with each others.
further strengthening the views, other best path is different languages. To elaborate it, when they communicate with each others and all speak their own words and speak of their customs important words. In addition, they can gain knowledge about different traditions. For example, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 80% workers are talk about only their traditions in their leisure time. As a result, people will be never fight for misunderstood about any culture.
To conclude, they will can all happily and easily live with each others owing to their know about their different culture from their friends and know about their different languages.
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- The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the best
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Suggestion: With
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Suggestion: known
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Suggestion: known
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Suggestion: Further
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Suggestion: further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21774193548 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68424848074 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512096774194 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8624459125 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937640022821 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477223466942 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046085413301 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706471629507 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210393429263 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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