We know that most adults spend a great deal of their time at work. Hence, they need to be sure that their job is fulfilling. In this essay, I will consider factors related to job satisfaction and how realistic these factors are.
Obviously, the most important reason that people work is for money. One survey revealed that people who work in a highly payed job are much happier than those who do not. Another main factor that determines job satisfaction is the work environment. Useful work conditions contribute to a high gratification by giving employees the morale to work. Employers should be provided by healthy work environment with minimum risks. Moreover, it is important to mention the personal advancement. Most people need a precise caker path and appreciation for the work done. For instance, staff whose efforts are not appreciated by their company will not be enjoying what they are doing. A job without promotion and recognition demotivates employees and reduces their satisfaction. However, many people may enjoy their job but poor salary might more them unhappy with their profession. For example, our country is full of people who adore their work, but due to our economycs and dreadful system, they do not enough money. This is one of the reasons why our society aim to live in foreign countries.
The job satisfaction for all workers in unrealistic because in most cases people do not get what they want. Great amount of employees are obsessed with financial gain but in reality they do not like what they are doing. People need to balance their work and free time by getting involved in activities that they enjoy. It will ensure that they get satisfied with work so making their lives more interesting.
In conclusion, we should admit that it is difficult to get an ideal job that totally fulfills workers. However, they can create their satisfaction by balancing their work and free time and doing what they really love. In this way, satisfaction level of labourers will significantly increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98520710059 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6914833903 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9292654113 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5909090909 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154900388632 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504993043073 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04594079992 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100153722933 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238871935843 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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