In present times, high compensation in a job is considered better, even if it does not make you happy. I completely disagree with this statement and opine that work satisfaction is far more advantageous than salary.
First of all, well satisfied job gives employee more sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if some one is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with this health, that person would not enjoy his life. While pursuing one's interest will always bring more value to the work being done and along with it, feeling of joy. For example, a lot of famous CEO's made their choices not because of lucrative packages, but because of their passionate and positive attitude. Therefore, choosing a field which could bring more satisfaction ought to be considered.
Secondly, doing what you are inclined to keeps you energized and therefore leads to career growth. An employee working with more zeal and passion is bound to deliver more than expectations set for him, thereby adding value to the client and organization relations. Consequently, he is rewarded with various recognition and promotions, thereby increasing his earnings as well. Studies have found that profession involving passion brings new role and accolades. Thus, a work with having more propensity edges out big income career in the long run.
In conclusion, job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people healthy and motivated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78272521366 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8351436821 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251179622327 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829802608644 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075337579175 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173348029313 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656137933741 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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