You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how

Dear Smith,

I am writing to you on possibility of taking a fortnight off to complete my masters qualification.

Practical examinations are already over, and now subjective assessments are pending; scheduled to commence from June 30. These exams are conducted on alternate days and for 4 hours daily. Attending office, especially in this kind of hectic schedule would be extremely challenging. In order to compensate for the loss of working hours, I would be working one hour extra for a month. Besides, I might need to work on a weekend to bring back the project on schedule.

Once I am finished with my exams, I will attain masters in Artificial Intelligence. It is widely renowned technology with scope in plethora of fields. The learning and exposure would give our team and organisation an edge over the others, thereby making our clients happy.

I am looking forward for your support.

Yours sincerely
Hari

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11842105263 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95124275433 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723684210526 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9264657048 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192280155233 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060696972651 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650198036614 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115808072695 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776089523243 0.0580467560999 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.