In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government have to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In Britain, elderly people tend to live in nursing homes where they can receive special medical health care. It is argued that the government is responsible for paying the service fee for them. From my point of view, this charge should belong to both the government and the family and this essay will give some reasons to confirm it.
First of all, let’s take a look at why the chairmans of a country need to be in charge with paying the cost for persons in retirement age. It is obviously to observe that when the elderly was young, they made an effort on their careers to build facilities as well as infrustructures and improve the life quality for citizens, which is including people in the state bureaucracy. To be clearer, workers expand traffic roads, build skyscrappers, or farmers grow crops to deliver to many other areas, even export to the international countries. Furthermore, the number of taxes paid regularly is income of the state employees, such as policemens, doctors, engineers. This is not only the government gives thanks these overage laborers by supporting the special medicine services, but also partly builds a more humane community. For example, in Vietnam, a huge of nursing homes has been established with full of facilities and caring groups, where the elederly often get the visit from volunteers.
On the other hand, family persons need to pay the costs for taking care of their beloved ones. Due to the law of direct blood relation, the offsprings, who are called the next generation have completely responsibilty for looking after their previous one. Otherwise, they need to offer their relatives a special health care programm and afford the added expense. After all, it is necessary for the old to have a worthy refuge, and that is the love of family.
To sum up, both the government and the family have duty to take care of the retirement people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, after all, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88785046729 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64985090238 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4999370118 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438615471239 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12819547761 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716759386827 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249815873673 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887005013607 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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