In the contemporary world, shopping online is becoming more and more popular that sometimes is more prominent than the traditional purchase. Therefore I believe the benefits of online bargaining outweigh the drawbacks because of its necessity and convenience.
To begin with, purchasing essential products via the internet gradually dominating global trade. The first main reason is that it brings up the convenience to the customers. Now, despite the different distances, the spenders can search for and select whatever the products on the network just by a mouse click or touching their phones. Especially in the middle of a serious pandemic, online shopping is proving its importance in implementing social isolation. The second reason why buying things online is becoming popular is that it is easier to compare prices and quality. Customers nowadays can go to online shops and make comparisons between the various places that they can potentially purchase from without the annoying crows or hours of queuing.
On the other hand, there are some inevitable disadvantages of shopping via the internets. Firstly, the difficulty of delivering and returning products. For examples, for some specific reasons such as the weather, the distances that can cause the delay of products' delivery. The exact same problem can occur with the returning that some products can not be returned or the returning will make you pay for the shipping charges which you had paid earlier. Secondly, buying commodities online means that you cannot bargain because of the fixed prices for each one.
Finally, according to the merits and demerits mentioned below, I cannot refute that online shopping menaces some latent disadvantages, however, in the modern world, the advantages of online purchasing is increasingly overcoming the drawbacks thanks to the technology advancement.
In conclusion, shopping online has its own enormous benefits which might surpass the disadvantage and also thrust the enhancement of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49514563107 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87886952418 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2945307892 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167924868194 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564815240234 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542470966185 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917108239343 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466078408235 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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