Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way out weight the disadvantages?
Nowadays, due to the advancement of technology, booking flights and purchasing various items through the stores' online site is in demand to the public because of its convenience. While there are a few disadvantages, online shopping has tremendous benefits to the consumers and to business owners.
On one hand, online shopping enables consumers to purchase anything online from the comfort of their home as long as there is internet connection and funds available to their online banking account for the payment. They do not need to travel a long distance to buy their needs, wait in a long queue to pay bills and purchase trending items since it is just a few finger taps away from their gadgets. For instance, due to the extremely hot weather in my location, I barely go out to buy grocery items, so, I order from Lulu online store and payment option will be cash on delivery. It is hassle-free since items will be delivered on my doorstep after an hour or two from the time it was purchased. In business sector, companies hire lesser employees because they encourage their customers to use online services, so fewer people go to their physical store. In this way, business owners save a large amount of money in giving salary to its workers.
On the other hand, few disadvantages of online shopping focus mainly on people becoming online shopaholic because they purchase whatever they feel is nice and especially on red tag and they often waste money. Moreover, other items do not have the same appearance from actual item or worst, the size is smaller or bigger especially for footwear.
To conclude, although online shopping has certain disadvantages like an addiction of people who are fond of buying items that are not important, it has an extremely positive impact on the consumers and to business owners. I believe that these benefits outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce. While there are a few disadvantages, online shopping has tremendous benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93987341772 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69475171937 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8728939962 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841104814127 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318019384459 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255689052265 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519294389288 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184065969216 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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