Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People these days prefer online shopping that is they buy groceries or book tickets on the internet. Online shopping is becoming popular day by day. There are several advantages and disadvantages of doing this activity.
Lets first talk about the advantages. Booking tickets online can not only save time but also save effort. Also, one can easily compare charges of different airlines and save money to buy tickets according to their convenience. There is no need to worry if you forget the ticket at home because you can easily download the ticket anytime you want. As we all know people these days are very busy with their work. One can save time as well as money by buying groceries online as their many discount coupons available online which are not available at stores.
On the other hand, if we talk about the disadvantages, People are getting addicted to online shopping and least prefer to go out, as a result, they won't explore more. Also, going out on a regular basis helps one to be fit.
Yet, I believe advantages outweigh the disadvantages because people are very busy with their work and whatever free time they get, they want to relax at home or prefer doing other activities like watching a movie.
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- Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86255924171 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41214070211 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.625992054 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144789846292 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615636059171 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521562555198 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985590336297 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610068711165 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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