In this day and age, online shopping is becoming widely spread, people are more interested in purchasing their items via Internet. These including books, air tickets, clothes and groceries. This tendency would bring out both pros and cons, however, in my opinion, its advantages prevail over the drawbacks. In this essay, I would like to elaborate my opinion.
On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that purchasing things on the Internet would cause some trouble. To begin with, customers can be cheated. They may lose money and have problems about poor quality goods and counterfeits, or even somebody cannot receive their wares after payment. Furthermore, trading on unreliable website can give hackers opportunity to steal personal information and credit card details.
On the other hand, it is noticeable that e-commerce offers lots of benefits for those who like shopping. Firstly, online shopping provide a wide variety of products. So that customers can compare items in terms of quality, price, manufacturer and even tiny specifications. Secondly, buying things on the Internet is definitely a useful choice for people who lead a hectic life. They don’t have to go to stores or travel a long distance and wait in a long queue. Stay at home and with only a simple click or a press, they can order any products whenever they want. And then the shopping websites deliver purchased material to the house. Last but not least, clients enjoy a great freedom to obtain global goods from renowned websites such as Amazon, eBay and Alibaba.
In conclusion, online shopping become more and more popular since it presents exceeding options to the purchasers. Despite some risks, it seems to us that electronic commerce is a cost-effective and convenient shopping method. It is most important that we should learn to buy things in a smart way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, even so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11803278689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70386268533 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665573770492 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5768633533 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247293235761 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606823217416 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729176780804 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143089697059 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950431201056 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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