Nowadays, it is widely argued whether acquiring items on the internet is a positive development, or if it can affect life on earth in a negative manner. In my opinion, the use of the internet has revolutionized the manner according to which markets work by enabling customers to buy things remotely through their computers, and therefore, by saving them quite a lot of time and money.
There are, however, those who believe that the internet is a dangerous method for purchasing daily staff and are skeptical towards it. More specifically, there are a lot of cases of fraud reported throughout the world, where customers were tricked and spent their money on items that never really existed. For example, a couple of years ago, a huge scam was discovered by French police in Paris. The members of this scam were two hackers who had developed a website pursuant to which they claimed that they operated as an e-shop of Apple and allegedly sold i-phones at a very low price. Their goal was to bait people, and afterwards, seize their money electronically.
Although incidents such as the above are quite alarming, I believe that the advantages of shopping through the internet far exceed the potential dangers associated with its use. In particular, e-commerce gives to buyers the opportunity to compare prices from endless shops located in different parts around the world. For example, the are online applications, like Amazon or Skroutz, that showcase to their users the price at which multiple shop-owners around the globe sell the same item. In addition, goods are sent to the customer’s address by post free of charge. Hence, customers are making the most reasonable choice in terms of both time and money.
In conclusion, I believe that online shopping, despite it being employed hazardously by some, can benefit people in many ways and therefore its respective use should be encouraged.
- It is suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from 78
- The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007 Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate Write at least 150 words 73
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross section of 100 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994 98 The second chart shows their destinations over the same period Write a report f 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative manner" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ment, or if it can affect life on earth in a negative manner. In my opinion, the use of the internet...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nt parts around the world. For example, the are online applications, like Amazon or Skr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07006369427 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76799047481 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6205886915 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114480679397 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352146882465 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235519893907 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591915227593 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298682089093 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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