Buying things online, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this way of shopping outweigh the disadvantages?
Online shopping for items is being further becoming famous, it has become a bone of contention to decide whether the advantaged are more important than the disadvantages. On my opinion, i think the leverages are more significant because purchasing things on the internet is accessible and convenient although the draw backs cannot be ruled out.
One of the factors that made shopping through the internet more notorious these days is for its accessibility. Almost all shopping centers, stores and even smaller shops have a website where they display goods for sale with their prices and these sites are usually opened for 24 hours a day and through the week. Some even have delivery services round the clock. One can check-in at anytime and place orders on interested goods, make payment and the items ordered will be delivered in a short period. In addition to this, purchasing on the internet makes life easier since you don't have to go through the stress of walking around a big hall trying to select one items out of a bulk of variety. The energy and time wasted on this can be retained to do some more important things while the goods can be bought at people's convenience. It has been reported in a research carried out on online shopping that majority of those using these means chose it because it is accessible and convenient.
Howbeit, the disadvantages of shopping online are numerous. By buying online, one can be scammed since most online shops require that payment be made online using bank card or bank card information, internet fraudsters use this medium to create fake shopping websites where they show fabricated items making buyers think its real and make payment and by this they rub customers of money and bank account details. For instance, when the discussion forum of a recently opened internet shopping store was reviewed, it was discovered that majority just viewed the good and didn't buy because they thought it was a fraudulent website. Apart from fraud, buying online deprive one of the pleasure of sight-seeing and appreciating goods being exhibited in their abundance and diversity. Also, one can be deprived of the enjoyment of meeting people of the same interest one-on-one which builds a stronger commerce community.
To conclude, although the drawbacks of online shopping cannot be over looked, but all these disadvantages cannot be compared to the leverage of purchasing what you want, when you want it which is easier and less stressful when buying through the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03588516746 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63077956541 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533492822967 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2878197824 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8666666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160625282063 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601813946609 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512699634775 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108141570416 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455257781774 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.