In today’s world, a number of families having their own private car have enhanced dramatically in many large metropolitans. Getting stuck in traffic congestion makes many systematic problems for individuals, so governments should take some practical and rational steps to deal with these issues. Throughout the following essay, some approaches will be discussed.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that during recent decades, citizens have had tendency to travel by their private cars. First of all, all employers and labors commute their workstations by their car instead of using public transportation, so this indifference would create an obvious chaos in the big cities. For instance, when a car is used just by one passenger, it will increase the traffic congestion, especially during the rush hours, which causes air pollution. Secondly, without a shadow of doubt, it seems that due to lacking of public transportation in all corners of the cities, people have to be used their cars when coming from remote areas. Ultimately, it is noticeable that people are compelled to take their private vehicles.
On the other hand, governments should enact some principles to prevent the severe traffic in city centers. Firstly, they should improve infrastructures and strengthen the transportation system by allocating much more fund for these sections. Also, it is more likely that some rules are enacted by governments to reduce the permission of private cars entering downtowns, so some disobedience drivers should be penalized strongly due to breaking the rules and entering restricted areas.
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of some problems that provide heavy traffics, and some practical solutions to solve these troubles, I would believe that this problem can be solved by respecting the rules and promoting the public facilities by governments. It is hoped that these solutions will be taken into account in the foreseeable future.
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42950819672 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99404766478 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6143062444 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198275943647 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665835043858 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507052341546 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107690118027 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649393661782 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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