The trend of purchasing a motor vehicle has significantly increased in the last three decades due to easy access to finance and cheaper available brands in the market. Although this brings convenience to the lives of the general public but this inexorable trend is resulting in traffic congestion in the metropolis around the world. I completely agree that mass car possession is primarily the reason for traffic jams and lawmakers can address this problem by introducing reasonable alternatives for transportation.
The hassle-free ownership programs offered by car manufacturers in collaboration with banks tempt the people to purchase the car. As a result, the cars on road are beyond the capacity of infrastructure and often results in the overcrowded road, especially during the peak hours. For instance, in Tokyo, office workers spend an average of 1.5 hours in traffic queues while commuting to the office.
To tackle the traffic issues, legislators need to enact certain laws to reduce the number of cars on the road. The most important measure is to make car possession less affordable by imposing tax and fuel surcharge, however, the government must make sure to provide cheaper alternatives else all these measures would result in strong resistance from the public. Furthermore, the government can run an awareness campaign to educate the dwellers of the impact of cars on the environment.
To conclude, although many major cities are struggling to control the traffic on road due to the overflow, authorities can tackle this pressing issue by imposing charges, ensuring the availability of cheaper transportation options and running the awareness programs for a clean environment.
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing, is this a curse or blessing? 61
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid? (The answer is a sample not written by myself. The goal is to compare the 73
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics, governments should spend the money on programmes encouraging the public to be active and stay healthy.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answe 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... brings convenience to the lives of the general public but this inexorable trend is resulting ...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the impact of cars on the environment. To conclude, although many major cities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40601503759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07107653903 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3311636663 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.8 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214102320717 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791875243876 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382188095752 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12023953625 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259227310237 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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