People believe that all parents should be forced to enroll in parenthood preparation courses to receive necessary skills in bringing up children in the future. I am of the opinion that parents should learn about childcare but this should not be mandatory.
The main reason for parents to participate in preparation classes is absorbing scientific knowledge that could assist them to raise kids properly. The knowledge is assumed to be reliable as it is verified by many professional experts in certain fields before showing. For example, the course includes lessons about physical health such as how to prepare balanced diet for their children or the method of taking care of kids when they are sick,...are totally necessary and helpful to parenthood. Moreover, the courses also contain loads of needed exercises in order to train mother and father-to-be with great parenting skills as well as prepared mentality down the road.
However, parents should not be compulsory for enrolling in the course despite the benefit from the preparation classes. The biggest argument for this belief is the disparity in children's attributes. It is apparent that characteristics of a child depending a lot on family background, which is rarely similar to each other. Thus, a course that could give parents the ability to nourish and exploit all; potential of the kids is clearly impossible to be designed as well as wasting their time in joining unworthy courses.
To sum up, bringing up children is undoubtedly the most important task and parents shoulder a serious responsibility on this problem. I am maintaining my opinion as it is an essential job but should not be required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...f taking care of kids when they are sick,...are totally necessary and helpful to p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18081180812 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88266759624 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4097883227 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367857270313 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125834164778 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580886692798 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218989912544 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258398954603 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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