Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses
At the beginning of 21st century, a large number of people expressed their deeply growing concern about the development of future generation. It is an accepted fact that taking care of kids is one of the most vital responsibilities in community. Therefore, the parents should attend the childcare training courses. Personally, I whole-heartedly agree with this opinion. Some points will be covered in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some reasons why caring for children is one of the most important priorities. First of all, the parents should pay more attention on their offsprings in terms of both mental and physical health. Apart from school, if they educate their kids about how to establish a healthy lifestyle and enrich their knowledge , the youngters who are going to inherit the Earth will become good and successful citizens. Secondly, without the focus from the parents, children tend to build up their bad habits and bad behavior at school and in the real life. As a consequence, they will engage in some anti-social activities like smoking, drinking alcohol and so on. Besides, they are likely to have poor performances at school which results in the reduction of their job opportunities in the future.
I agree with the idea that the parents should be required to take the childcare training courses. Because, with the development of technology nowadays, the parents tend to ignore their kids, they spend a lot of time to be entertained by their phones. Moreover, childcare training courses will provide them a lot of skills and experience in terms of raising their children in the right way, especially those parents who have the first child.
With all things considered, I believe that governments and societies should enhance people’s awareness about this phenomenon. If the parents involve in the childcare training courses, the comprehensive development of future generation will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
At the beginning of 21st century, a large number of people expressed their deeply growing c...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...thy lifestyle and enrich their knowledge , the youngters who are going to inherit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26045016077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91749776832 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1063787629 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208202631584 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741362004374 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743130738811 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130205396535 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269692344725 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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