This century is century of technologies based on this now the internet influences on people’s lives on the score of that it is more desired than TV broadcasts. I concur with this thought therefore in this essay I will write about positive and negative sides of this idea and in the end give my own standpoint.
Nowadays the internet is one of the most important and necessary things in the world. Most people especially young attempt with all their might to be developed personalities. They burn with desire to wonder more and more new information related to different and various spheres. For such as youth the internet is very convenient, so people can find whatever data which they need or some information that they interested in. In the internet people find more answers for their questions and doubts than on television.
Second reason why the internet is more popular than TV is that it is easier to search out required and needed info in a short period of time likewise films and soap operas. People have not to wait the next series of their favorite soap operas. Moreover, it is beneficial and great for people who are not able to watch TV by reason of their works.
However, there is definite part of people who consider that TV is better than the internet. Some people prefer to select television if they have an opportunity to choose between the internet and TV broadcasts. Because there are retirements that cannot and people who are not able to use the internet as well as younger.
To conclude, whatever the internet uses to be in demand and affect to life of people regardless of their wishes and preferences. I agree with this concept that the internet plays an essential role in our life compared with televisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...out required and needed info in a short period of time likewise films and soap operas. People ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80081300813 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58497274201 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1499997172 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188848184977 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679877427135 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038585012252 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112607552718 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237873535589 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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