The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households who lived in their own or rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, these countries saw a rise in home ownership but experienced a decrease in rentals.

From 1918 to 1971, there was a higher percentage in rented accommodation than those in owned accommodation until 1971 both figures were equal. In 1918, almost 80% of households were in rented houses while less than 10% owned their places. However, rentals decreased from over 80% to approximately 60% between 1918 and 1961 while there was an increase in owned residential properties from 20% to 40% during the same period of time.

In the next 40 years, the figure for those in owned accommodation outnumbered those in rented accommodation, increasing by 10% to 60% in 1981 and reaching a peak at about 70% in 2001 before dropping to around 65% in 2011. On the other hand, the percentage of those in rented accommodation decreased gradually from 50% in 1981 to its lowest point at 30% in 2001 before rising to around 35% in 2011.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86885245902 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88171459673 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5196585791 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361887330855 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170936927937 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133662521483 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244885343764 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733282127639 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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