childcare is considered the most important factor for the society these days,so parents should attend parental training to give better care to these children.To what do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In world, it is a big challenge regarding to prevention of global climate change. some people argue that this is individual's responsibility, while other think that this is the responsibility of governments and multinational companies.
On first hand, some believe that they should pay attention at this problem individually and to improve their life style. For instance , how they dispose of their rubbish, how to reuse of water and plastic things. Every people should not through plastic bottles, bags and so many things. Due to those activities , the climate change related issue may control. my aunt , who is science teacher, knows this problem properly, so she is very careful about her house rubbish and adivises to her neighbours.
On the other hand, other people believe that the governments and multinational companies should consider this matter. first, governments should appoint new committees, who work on this problem. Second, give authorities whenever necessary, they take action against of disobeying rules. Third, big companies should careful about their disposal of water and solid wastes. In addition to these companies should cooperate with governments rules. they should not free harmful gases in atmosphere. they should first filter the harmful gases. my father's friends, who is social worker, frequently
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- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change Others believe that actions by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference Discuss 56
- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change Others believe that actions by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference Discuss 56
- childcare is considered the most important factor for the society these days so parents should attend parental training to give better care to these children To what do you agree or disagree Some people believe that a college or university education shoul 33
- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change Others believe that actions by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference Discuss 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53431372549 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82117331624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2654583988 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2666666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126049986043 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426947695696 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324607148201 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786701544345 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320172922344 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.