childcare is considered the most important factor for the society these days,so parents should attend parental training to give better care to these children.To what do you agree or disagree?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, i reckon, i think, as well as, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38613861386 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30349023616 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.196996717 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 408.0 106.682146367 382% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.75 20.7667163134 365% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 7.06120827912 538% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203976664102 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125222279583 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562500305141 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139216860868 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807859987901 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.65 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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